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April 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this pairing. It is so hot! Please write more!
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
amazing fic! can't wait for more of your work and thankyou so much for the heads-up
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy... crap. That is so freaking hot. I do hope that you continue this because.. just.. wow.
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, first a hot springs handjob and now a tied up Byakuya getting pounded. *fans self* You did good :)
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh god please write more seeing a sub byakuya was so fucking hot please please PLEASE!!!!
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More, More!! Don't stop there. I think you need at least one more chapter, where Shunsui finds out, much to his shock, that not only did Ukitake get over him but also got himself a super hot new boyfriend. *grins*
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more please!!!
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If given a choice I think anyone would pick to have more of these two, that was definitely some very delicious smut, especially with Byakuya all tied up and at Ukitake's mercy! ;)
It's cute how Byakuya was acting just like a teenager with a crush and then to see Byakuya's reaction when he finds out that Ukitake has known that he's liked him since he was young was very adorable. I think if you do decide to write more they need to at the very least have some discussion about what Ukitake said to him-it's entirely up to you but I hope to see more ^_^
It's cute how Byakuya was acting just like a teenager with a crush and then to see Byakuya's reaction when he finds out that Ukitake has known that he's liked him since he was young was very adorable. I think if you do decide to write more they need to at the very least have some discussion about what Ukitake said to him-it's entirely up to you but I hope to see more ^_^
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September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MOAR! You should at least establish them as a steady couple before ending it. If you end it here it makes it more look like a 1 night stand. Just my opinion; I hope you continue this.
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September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I really hadn't considered this pairing (or Shunsui/Toushiro or Byakuya/Kenpachi, for that matter) but I'm intrigued by them all now. Besides, cross pairing five male captains DEFINITELY gets my attention!
A scene that really stuck with me is where Byakuya wakes up to Jyuushiro coughing and thinks back to Hisana. That scene just seemed very real. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.
A scene that really stuck with me is where Byakuya wakes up to Jyuushiro coughing and thinks back to Hisana. That scene just seemed very real. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.