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September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful start to this story, the characterizations of Ishida and Ichigo fit them perfectly, even Orihime was right on :)
I loved Ishida's portrayal in this chapter he just seems so sad, he's just passing threw life doing what's expected instead of truly living. On the other hand if he were to actually say what he truly wants he risks angering his father, losing a friend and possibly his reputation-the poor boy is definitely not having a very good time. But the detail about Ishida's life, where he is now and what is expected of him was really well done and thought out, I can't wait to see how things progress from here. I'm definitely looking forward to the rest of this story, it's going to be interesting to see how everything plays out ^_^
I loved Ishida's portrayal in this chapter he just seems so sad, he's just passing threw life doing what's expected instead of truly living. On the other hand if he were to actually say what he truly wants he risks angering his father, losing a friend and possibly his reputation-the poor boy is definitely not having a very good time. But the detail about Ishida's life, where he is now and what is expected of him was really well done and thought out, I can't wait to see how things progress from here. I'm definitely looking forward to the rest of this story, it's going to be interesting to see how everything plays out ^_^
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September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ishida.
I can't wait for more of this story.
I can't wait for more of this story.