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for Initiation Indignation

by chibizoe

schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story. Just enough lemony goodness to keep me going. Love the amount naughtiness from each captain.
Very nice.
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was REALLY hot - I hope you're going to keep going! I guess you're finished with the captains, but there are always the vice captains, right? (I dunno about Yachiru or Omaeda, though . . . She's kinda young, I bet he has a booger fetish. Ew.) Or maybe Hitsugaya gets taken to Hueco Mundo and has to go through an initiation ritual with the Espada? *(~^_^~)* *Makes super-hopeful sparkly anime eyes at you*

schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOCness or not, this was sexy.

She really liked how your own writing reflected Hitsugaya's moods for each chapter, and how, in the beginning he merely submitted, but as it progressed he obviously got a lot more into it.

Anyway, this was made of awesome.
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting and fun! I think I like Ichimaru and Kyouraku the best. What was your reasoning for picking Baker's Dozen for twelve (since a baker's dozen is thirteen?)
person Yakumo
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O That was...interesting. I like the concept of the fic though..I'm looking forward to your next update!