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December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am enjoying this too bad its a one shot
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December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*groans in appreciation* Absolutely WONDERFUL!!! I definetly had to baracade myself in my room for a while if you know what I mean.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so don't think i'm a freak when I say...Mayuri is my favorite character from Bleach. Then again, I am a freak so what the hell.
I want to say this was nicely done. It didn't feel rushed...You nailed Uryu's personality which is hard to do with something like this (At least I thought you did)...And you didn't doing a cliched type story where 'Mayuri tortures Uryu but soon finds himself falling in love' because we all know even if Mayuri did fall in love he would still treat him like shit. I thought you wrote Mayuri nicely, keeping him in character from all that we have seen. He may seem easy but he's actually quite tough as I have tried...I did him ina roleplay and it's hard to keep him fromm being...Normal.
Maybe that's just me because I like him so much. XD
Anyway, I really hope to see further work from you, Bleach-wise and maybe I'll go look at some of your other fanfiction, as you have great potential to be an excellent writer.
If you ever need to brainstorm with someone, or just need someones opinion, then you can bug me. XD I have free time.
~*Koala*~
I want to say this was nicely done. It didn't feel rushed...You nailed Uryu's personality which is hard to do with something like this (At least I thought you did)...And you didn't doing a cliched type story where 'Mayuri tortures Uryu but soon finds himself falling in love' because we all know even if Mayuri did fall in love he would still treat him like shit. I thought you wrote Mayuri nicely, keeping him in character from all that we have seen. He may seem easy but he's actually quite tough as I have tried...I did him ina roleplay and it's hard to keep him fromm being...Normal.
Maybe that's just me because I like him so much. XD
Anyway, I really hope to see further work from you, Bleach-wise and maybe I'll go look at some of your other fanfiction, as you have great potential to be an excellent writer.
If you ever need to brainstorm with someone, or just need someones opinion, then you can bug me. XD I have free time.
~*Koala*~
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well written but creepy. xD I hope to see more work from you in the future though.