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December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nahhh
I thought it was great, great grammar, good plot, great insight on the characters, awesome pair... And your writing was fluid, and I didn't sense the rushness you talked about.
It should really have more Urahara x Ichigo fics... care to add? I would love to read another story of yours ^~
I thought it was great, great grammar, good plot, great insight on the characters, awesome pair... And your writing was fluid, and I didn't sense the rushness you talked about.
It should really have more Urahara x Ichigo fics... care to add? I would love to read another story of yours ^~
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story! It was very well done, there needs to be more stories out there with this couple. I can’t believe you left it like that!! Still, even without the smut you did a wonderful job on this! Keep writing! :)
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May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLONK... write the smut!! xD you cant leave us like this... it's soooooo evil!!
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I loved your story ^_^ especially the part where Renji interrupts. Great job!
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December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this piece. The lack of sex added to the intensity and emotionality of the fic. I would absolutely recommend this as necessary reading for any Urahara fan, let alone any Urahara/Ichigo fan. You've captured his mix of meddling, patience, and cool-headed tactician's nature perfectly.
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was hell good got the blood goin! the only thing u could improve on is the SMUT!
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was cute as could be.
No reason whatsoever for you not to love it too. It was well written, and rather funny. Everyone seemed very in character. The ending was very well done as well.
Often she finds that smut can take away from a story, especially if it's just smut for smut's sake.
So anyway, well done. She hopes you continue writing, not only inh the Bleach fandom, but the UraIchi pairing specifically.
No reason whatsoever for you not to love it too. It was well written, and rather funny. Everyone seemed very in character. The ending was very well done as well.
Often she finds that smut can take away from a story, especially if it's just smut for smut's sake.
So anyway, well done. She hopes you continue writing, not only inh the Bleach fandom, but the UraIchi pairing specifically.
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October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was really sweet, cute, amusing and well written. *Sighs,* this fandom really needs more Urahara/Ichigo writers like you around, this was perfect! Loved it!
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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
COOLIES you're here too...
A&R
A&R
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An interesting interpretation of my prompt :)