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i posted the earlier review, but forgot to put my name. Sorry about that. The again it wouldn't have happened if i wasn't so sleepy, but again my fault so sorry.

Hey. School and work are really crazy right now, so yeah...I haven't been able to do much of anything lately. :(

As always, your lemons display a great balance of..well, smut and feeling. It's such an odd combination when you think about it, but somehow it works. LOVED the cameo from Ukitake and Unohana. And yes, the men should be scared. The SWA is not something to be trifled with. It's no wonder the SMA is so marginalized, hehe.

That was a very good chapter you've made. I never would have thought that I would see Soi Fong fall in love with someone or be nervous

Nice enough chapter. Good sex scene at the beginning, particularly the little affectionate touches in the midst of the "action." (Hee hee hee!)

I enjoyed Retsu and Jushiro's cameo, as expected, and I eagerly await further jokes from the Women's Association and further plot from analysis of the cadavers. I'd have liked the chapter to be a bit longer, but haven't had much free time myself lately (hence the lack of updates) and understand your own. Waiting patiently for more over here.

I can’t get over the interesting dichotomy you have in your lemons. Last chapter was a wonderful first time with all the characteristics you expect to see. Emotions ranging from: eagerness, to giddiness, with the usual hints of first time uneasiness. Then you give us this wonderful chapter that goes straight into the other extreme. Hot, heavy, fast paced animalistic sex. Both sides leave a reader happy and wanting more.

Then there are the lighter and fluffier moments, for lack of a better term, with everyone else. The happy family moments that tie back into the first stories, and characters we have grown to adore. Especially as those characters reappear and get a spotlight in the story. It is wonderful to know that Retsu and Ukitake will be playing a prominent role, but that just brings up more rampant speculation on what might happen later on. Which just means you have me clinging to this story until the end; and should you write another story in this universe, I’ll read that one too.

I cannot express my eternal glee over the machinations of the association. You have to admire their way of not only getting what they want, but terrifying their significant others in the process too. Out of all the parts you write I think those where the association shines are my favorite. They never fail to make me smile.

I haven't reviewed in a while... SORRY! Forgive me. :} I LOVED this chapter. Soi's so cute!! And Gwydion HOTTTT!!! I have a feeling the drama really starts from here though.....

Heh...I stopped reviewing 'cause all of your writing is just awesome. I find it a bit pointless to constantly write "that was great" after every chapter. I've been doing a lot of reading lately, mostly in the GW universe, and hadn't checked this for updates until today. So that being said, I truthfully haven't been taht interested in reading this. I like Soi-Fong, but she was never that important a character to me. Give me Grimmy any day. ^.^' And Ulquiora on my good days. I kinda miss seeing the Vizard. They add such a ... dynamic plot point to the whole story. I kinda wonder why I haven't seen more Grimmjow/Hiyori fics... *shrugs* They are so much alike. Yet their backgrounds are so wildly different. Excuse my rambling. random thoughts from a tired mind. Anyway, I don't like how they just sorta vanished after giving Ichigo the training he needed. Shinji may be a bastard but he's a fun bastard. Oh well. Nothing I can do about it.
Anyway I wanted to say: more great writing, please keep it up.

Loved the chapter!!! It's nice to see them taking that next step!

Life's been hectic (new job training) so I have had next to zero time to do anything else.

I'll still be lurking for updates though!

An excellent chapter, as always. I suppose I should just keep my criticism to myself I am by my very nature a spiteful and mercurial person. So, for everyone's sake, I must ask you to continue to do that voodoo that you do so well. P.S. The phrase is 'et tu' even though the proper French for that would be 'et toi'. But I hope you can forgive the francophone that I am.

all right!!! another great chapter!!! i feel so bad everyone's making huge reviews with so much help while im the little guy at the end... lol