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for The Crumbling World

by Rockyshores

person satterb
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW!!! That was sooo sweet. I was smiling the entire time I was reading. This has been the sweetest story ever! Can't wait for the next installment!
person Kat the Koneko
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! lol sory the o got stuck and my delete key isnt working right now. too many reviews HAHAHAHA. i love it keep it up
person Roku
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAYS! *Jumping up and down for joy* I was figuring something along the lines of Ichigo getting captured again and Kenpachi becoming a rage filled machine, but Renji getting killed was a pleasant twist~
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wahhhhhhhh i cry for ichigo-chan *sniffles* so sad. He seems to attract some worst possible situations to him XD great excellent story!! Cant wait to read the next chappy!!
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You really had it out for Grimm, but I still feel like Kenpachi went easy on him XD

I loved when Ichi stomped on his head :) I can't wait for the next chapter.
person satterb
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot Damn! Kenpachi got his "Strawberry" back! That was quick and to the point. NOW...on with the good stuff! Thanks for another great update.
person NeonOranges
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
We love trainwrecks though, just like we all love Kenpachi and Ichigo... or more preferably, Kenpachi on Ichigo... Mmmmm.
person ShadowofLight
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I jsut had to review this fic even though I've been reading all your stuff (damn you are one hell of an awesome writer!) but I'm glad Abarai is dead! I'm open minded but when you have a close-minded attitude to force someone who sure as hell doesn't love you (even says it to your face) to love you, well I jsut wanted to jump in and forcefully introduce his head to the castle walls until there was a permanent stain of his useless brains on the stone. Then then very well kick the living crap out of the idiots who said yes to the marriage wihtout hearing Ichigo out. Okay I'm being slightly more cruel than usual... I need breakfast. Later gator!
person satterb
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you killed Renji, but he was just getting in the way anyway...You're right...it's like a wreck and you can't look away...Hell, you even slow the car down to get a good look. Sick aren't we...

Loved the update..Hee!
person Pickle Reviver
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nuuuuuuuuuuuuu!! Why did ya kill mah Ren-Ren-channn????!!
He was getting so smexy with his dominating behaviour