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for The Crumbling World

by Rockyshores

person yellow
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor thing! I can't wait to see what happens next! Great job!
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Kenpachi!!!!! Waaaahhh!!!!

Of course I still vote for one... I do hope everything would be okay in the end... Oy! Masaki! Help your daughter--erm son out! XD

Please do update soon. ^__^V
person Pickle Reviver
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GOSH! I love it when Renji's acting, rough, dominant, freakin posessive and overly mean! It makes him so sexy! RAWRRRRR!!! You know, I'm starting to think this story would be a lot smexier if it would only fold around Renji's and Ichi's relationship. But that's probably because I'm Ren/Ichi obsessive. yeah, that's it..
So just keep on continuing your good work and make mah little grumpy face smile again like you do when I read this story~! Cx
And yes! I'm in for some Ichi-rape! How harsh that may sound >.
person satterb
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I didn't realize Renji would be a bad guy! But I still love the story and the plot is really engaging. So keep up the good work. Look forward to the next update...Yay you!
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was one hell of a lemon! Possessive!Kenpachi FTW!

XD

And oh, Letter A for me please. ^_^V
person blue4summer
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I vote not because I don't wantb to see ichigo hurt please not.

anyway great story
person KiKa
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
option B! Please no rape for poor Ichigo^^
person satterb
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Kenpachi got Ichi back! I love those two together. I also love your Kenpachi. He is so much fun to read. Can't wait for the next update!
person Viper
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! Good luck!
person satterb
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I am all for it! Kenpachi needs a reason to "break bad" and that would certainly provide it, now wouldn't it! I love this story and squeal like a school girl everytime you update. Yay!

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