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for The Crumbling World

by Rockyshores

person Bianca D.
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know that you said that the story is headed in a N/C direction, but I vote B. (Although it is your story so you will do as you see fit......) By the way, I love this story; keep up the excellent work.
person Jade
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
B- The story is really pretty good keep it up
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Arghh! They're falling in love with each other! Kyaaah! This really sends me to fangirl mode... XD

I don't mind, whatever happens... 1 or 2, it's really up to you... but if I really have to pick, then go with 1 since you mentioned that's where the story is going. ^__^

Much love! <3
person Stacy
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hummmm......A or B??? i just don't know.........well duh....AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! i really love this story, it's just awesome!
person S.Venus
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM

A-I would like a rape scene.

So...um yeah, I don't know any other to say this but STILL AMAZING! This story is actually doing a good job and I check up on it every chance I get. I would like to say that, I've read quite a lot of stories, but I think that it would be amazing to hear more of the other story plots, like Renji riding heroicly on a white stalion or Grimmjow in a dugeoun with pet jagurs or something. I mean you for one are braver then me to be able to write a yoai this cool. You're doing your style and you're doing it good. Keep it up!
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mhmmm, that cave scene was so hot & cute at the same time. Also, vote yes for the Ichi NC.
person rin
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES for rape scene!!!
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story and if the plot calls for a rape scene then do the scene :)
Everyone tortures the main character in their story at least a little bit, you just make it up to him later on, a good smut scene with Kenpachi XD
person satterb
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story...it is so much fun to read. I would be willing to read a rape scene as long as the story doesn't become too angsty. Keep up the great work! I'm glad that you update pretty regularly. I have already read everything else on your profile. I hope you keep creating for a long time.
person YellowBumble
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot! I can't wait to see what happens next! I love your story so far! Good luck with the next chapter!