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by Rockyshores

schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another thing for "dead"....

Before you rag on someones writing abilities maybe you should grow some balls and post your real name so that we lowly peons can bask in the so-called "glory" of your "talent"....

[Geeze if the sarcasm were any thicker I'd need an 'effin shovel...]
person dead
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Incorrect. Your spelling and grammar are terrible. You can't even spell 'summary' correctly. I wrote badly on purpose because I knew you would dismiss the review and reviewer.

And you have no understanding of Kenpachi. The person you portray in any of your stories is a totally different character to that in Bleach. Your first attempt at first person writing was laughable.

To return your own words to you: 'Get off your high horse'. I read your stories to remind myself how bad some fan fiction can be.
person fan
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dead, What's wrong you seem to have forgotten your own fanfiction link?
person another author here who prefers to remain unknown until the time being
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
To Dead, I don't know if you find so much satisfaction in flaming other people's works or not, but there's what we call an etiquette when it comes to reviewing other people's works... You hide behind an anonymous name which can mean that you might probably be one of the author's here(aff net)too. Everyone commits mistakes and I'm sure you're no exception to that.

And also, have you ever heard of AU (alternate universe)? OOC (Out of character)? If you are an author or reader, I'm sure you should be aware of those terms. If you do know them, then we should go back to the matters of etiquette. Why are you still reading and reviewing if you a lot of comments? Really now, YOU ARE LAME!!!

Have you ever heard of subtly? Or should I say, breaking it to the author gently with regards to whatever errors that you have found? But it seems to me that you don't. You're crude and selfish. You disregard others just to satisfy your "noble" cause so that it would fit into your standards.

People like you really step on my last nerve. You don't show some decency to respect others neither do you have any for yourself. If I were you, just shut your trap and move on with your life. We're not begging you to read fanfiction, and I'm sure the author doesn't kiss the ground that you walk on so that you would leave her a review. I pity you, really.

And besides, not all of the writers were born or raised from wherever you're from, or received whatever education was given to you so get your friggin head out of your ass!!!



To the authour, bonnenuit:

Just let it pass, don't let the reviewer get to you. I'll gladly reveal myself if need be. For now, just write whatever is in your heart. I'm sure you attract more that enough readers in every story that you write.

<3
person Pickle Reviver
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Go fuck him! WOOT!!!
person Pickle Reviver
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! And bad dead, Bad! Let's all be nice~! C:

Bonnenuit, your characters may be OOC, but you know what, that thing makes your stories special and different from the others! (I like your stories because Ichi is always so deliciously uke-ish xP) That makes your stories popular! C: Just keep on doing your thing. *thumbs up*

It's okay dear! Mama's here! *GLOMP*
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay smutt!
I love this pairing and Ichigo with Urahara. Odd, but fun pairing, and I do hope you continue to wrie this fic ^__^
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel for you... Don't worry about that Biatch of a reviewer who threw you a flame, what matters most is that there are readers who love your stories. =^____^= (like me! <3)
person Pickle Reviver
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woahh! Ichi's getting grumpy! xD
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, Ken-chan's getting possessive!