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for The Crumbling World

by Rockyshores

person Pickle Reviver
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A review! So now you have to write faster! WOOH! Cos I wanna read more! GLOMP
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Never doubted that the story had a plot XD

Love it!! I'm starting to like this pairing more than Bya/Ichi and it's all your fault ;)

Next chapter soon please :)
person Gnat
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm burning with curiosity! Poor boy. As a GrimmIchi fan, I'll say don't be afraid to let anything happen there. u.u ...Well, maybe I'm biased, I know the story is about KenIchi. You're getting better and better at writing, which makes the story ever more enjoyable to read. Continue with all due speed!
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh love this idea & plot so far. Hehe can't wait for the next chapter & to see what pairing happens next!
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, cuddled up Ichigo and Kenpachi ^_^ And I can't wait to see Ichigo's reaction to his engagement.
person Pickle Reviver
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOH!!!! Ichi has to marry Renji, that's awesome! Ichi's gonna be so pissed about this when he finds out! xD
person Gnat
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so excited about this concept. :) I'm a sucker for knights, bandits, Ichigo in trouble... So keep writing please~
person Pickle Reviver
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahahahahahhahahahahhh... *drool drool* I can't wait for the other grabby men, I bet they'll like wittle Ichi. xD'
I hope Grimmy will come to try and kidnap Ichi again, that would be freakin' awesome! xD And I can't wait to read about Ichi's family's reaction and of course Renji's about Ichi's kidnapping! xDDD
You're doing absolutely great with this story so I can't wait for the next chapter! GLOMP ;3
person ShadowofLight
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ROFL oh god! Now I can't get the image of Ichigo is a dress out of my mind! I can almost hear Yahiru saying that he looks like a princess or something :D Oh this is good. Poking fun at him is fun!
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah this is great! I love everyone calling Ichigo a woman. Wonder if he'll eventually just get sick of correcting them?