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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, this is wonderful.
She is enjoying this very much.
Your writing is a little choppy; it could do with a little polish, but it is still an lovely read.
Favourite scene? When Ulquiorra says that Ichigo didn't give him as much trouble as some. Grimmjow's reaction was rather priceless.
Simple, but oh so like him.
Anyway, she is very much looking for an update.
She is enjoying this very much.
Your writing is a little choppy; it could do with a little polish, but it is still an lovely read.
Favourite scene? When Ulquiorra says that Ichigo didn't give him as much trouble as some. Grimmjow's reaction was rather priceless.
Simple, but oh so like him.
Anyway, she is very much looking for an update.
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RAWRRRRRRR!!! I WANNA READ MORE OF THIS!! Fuck dammit! This story is SOOOOO sexy!
I really hope you're gonna update soon! Though, I'll be patient. (I'll try)
I really hope you're gonna update soon! Though, I'll be patient. (I'll try)
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I think this is really really good. I haven't read a story like this before and I would like for you to continue, please and thankies! ^_^
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November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i am totally intrigued by this story. i love the way it begins. thank you! i am hooked!