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by Daydreamer79

person Yakumo
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking forward to Kira/Renji. <3 The only thing I don't like about Kenpachi is his hair. I wish he'd wear it down like he did when he was younger. I love you Izuru..<3 Please don't keep him in pain for much longer. I'm having a hard time finding good pictures of him. >_< -is collecting Kira pics-
person Jennifer
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*squeeeeal* OMG o.O grimmjowxulquiorra fluff!!!! me like ^-^

and the scene with byakuya and gin was so sweet...heehee

"Why would I go and leave something as good as you when I worked so hard to get you in bed." HILARIOUS!!! XD

this has to be one of my favorite chappies so far, i can not wait for the next installment :D
person Afrieal
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy hellinahandbasket I was worried you were gonna kill them *sigh* Grimmy reminds me a little of a friend of mine's maine coon cat (and you made him like it too funny) that cat hates most people and other felines but put him near a disabled or abused child or his alpha and he'll defend them to the death you've picked that up with Nel too *smile* great job. we were curious if you were gonna have renji (or anyone else) either show Kira they have feelings for him and help him with his cutting problem. (Renji isn't the only one that would be good with him i've seen some great fics with him and hisagi or Ikkaku if that helps) thanks for the continued story we look foreward to more.

Affie and Rysh
person Afrieal
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great update I can't wait to see what you have in store for Kitty-kun and the sad one the Kami know they're dangerous in cannon when you get them into fanfic they're down right freaky *grin* keep up the great work

Affie (who hates being stuck in dial up hades)
person vbruce
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gods I love Kenpachi. Interesting twist to the tale. Still enjoying.
person Jennifer
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'M SOOO HAPPY! THANKS SO MUCH, YOU'VE JUST MADE MY DAY! no, seriously, i'm flattered.

the chapter was AWESOME! hopefully, my little...uh...rant thingy didn't disrupt your planned out story line to much...heehee

keep up the totallywonderfulworkthatIabsolutelylove! XD
person Yakumo
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh..nice job. I can't wait for the next chapter..go Byakuya-sama!!!
person Afrieal
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*smile* another great chappy i am worried about poor Kira and if Gin is smart he'll get Renji to keep an eye on his old school friend that's just my opinion tho it's your story *smile* goddess poor baby needs some mugwart tea (it's a common herbal remedy used for depression in asia) keep the great work coming. Rysh and I lookj foreward to the next chapter.

Affie and Rysha
person vbruce
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I like how Gin's uncertainty is expressed through Shinso.
person Jennifer
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
noooo, Grimm-kun!!!! ...i loved this chapter so much...heehee

the sad thing is, Grimmjow is my second fav character, Byakuya's my number 1, and Gin is number 3...SOB it's so depressing D:

don't get me wrong, i still love this story, but don't ya hate it when you read something really really good and that happens?

...i'm okay now

keep up the awesome work and good luck with your new job! :D