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by Daydreamer79

person vbruce
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kira. I really do wish him happiness. He's been through a lot as well. Still enjoying very much.
person Yakumo
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOO KIRA!!! -hugs him tightly- I wanna see you happy..I love you so much...T__T But anyway, I'm glad you're going to have a separate fic for him..hopefully he'll be happy. On a separate note, that Byakuya/Gin lemon was delicious.<333
person Afrieal
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow the last few chapters went from sweet to powerful and back again. Gin seemed a bit to poised to be recovering from rape but my experince with the victems is mostly with females. Kira's dismorphic episode (the cutting) was spot on (i have a friend that cuts and her discriptions were similar) Rysh and I asked our Yamma-Jii and he said you've got alot of great discriptives for everything as well *smile* we look foreward to more and i'll admit it this pairing is growing on me a bit more

Affie and Rysh
person Dudette
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah, you know, I rarely hang around at adultfanfiction.net(always prefered DA, and barely have the time to manage my gallery there as it is...) but ever since I started to read this story I keep running back here to check for the next chapter :D Seriously, this is just a great story, it got it all, love, humour, angst, and action - kudos to you!
person riokali
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i still love the story and thanks for not making gin suffer too much.was wondering if the sequel could be kira/zaraki.kira has a submissive nature and he would need a very strong character to keep him in check plus i've never read a good kira/zaraki:)
person vbruce
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done. I'm worried about Gin going back as well. Thank you again for the enjoyable read.
person Jennifer
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, BEST EFFING CHAPTER YET!!! yeah!!!!

loved the lemon, it was absolutely perfect! :D
person Yakumo
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how you delved into Gin's past here. Poor Gin-san though...T__T -hugs him- BAD AIZEN! D:
person Jennifer
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwww, that was really sweet! :D

how long is this story going to be? it's so awesome, i can't wait to read about the scouting, heehee

keep up the great work!
person vbruce
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The ending of this was really sweet. I think they're coming along nicely.