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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good for a quick reading, though it holds no intrinsic value. My stories are much the same.
As advice, I would suggest separating the story into smaller paragraphs and double spacing between paragraphs in order to make things look cleaner. This can be by pressing enter twice in the 'edit chapter' window.
As advice, I would suggest separating the story into smaller paragraphs and double spacing between paragraphs in order to make things look cleaner. This can be by pressing enter twice in the 'edit chapter' window.