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for Strawberries and Chocolate

by holywyvern

person NettChan
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What if Ichigo's fantasy is Renji doing a striptease/lapdance wearing a mandarin style dress?
person lifelike
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think you should have renji bottom. whether it is part of ichigo's fantasy or not doesn't matter but i would love to see them switch it up.
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi love the story and I sooo cant wait till the next chapter is out.
If you need any suggestions for people to add with Renji x Ichigo I have
a few.
But Like I Said Great Story & Great Chapter Keep Going You ROCK!!!
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter with Toushiro was good, but I can't wait until the next chapter. :D Ichi in a french maid's outfit? YESSSSSSSS!!! ^^
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!!!!! Poor Shiro-chan!!! I just wanna hug him cause he gave it his all. Blackmail surely does have to suck... And I didnt mind the small break, there never is enough good Shiro-chan smut. ^^ And the quick peek at Ichi-berry and a maid outfit... I WANNNA SEE IT!!!
Well, until next chappie! ^^
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You gotta tell us what Ichi's fantasy is. I am way too curious for words. Also, must say that I found the Toshiro gang-bang hot as hell :D
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very hot!!! you are a smut GOD!!!! lol but for ichigo fantasy i think i should be a student teacher fantasy but with a twist both he and renji are the students and ether byakuya or jushrio be the teacher and they both need a good lesson lol
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
e.e The maid chapter was absolute goodness, thank you so much! I don't know what Ichi's fantasy should be, sorry. ^^; I really wanted to help, but I have no idea.
person Yakumo
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn I LOVE YOU! The constant updates..the sexy scenes...perfect. Ichigo in the maid's outfit= epic win and the dirty talk was just icing on the cake. Well done. <3