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I liked this even though I'm not really a fan of seme Ichigo, I can't wait for the ShinjixIchigo!

Congradulations on Nano! ^_^
The ich/ish smut was very yummy it's too bad it has to end so I'm glad we'll get back to that, of course now I'm curious to see who's next and how they're going to help, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter :)

That was great. I can't wait for an update. Although I thought it was weird that Ichigo couldn't get Ishida's first name without stuttering or stalling, whatever that was.

Another wonderful piece from a wonderful author.

SHe must admit, she is looking forward to the announced Urahara x Shinji x Ichigo.

Very nicely done. Interesting take on the reaction to the poison and an unusual way of helping Ichigo out. Looking forward to more of this.

Oh so loving this story, your smut is superb XD

I can't wait for the next chapter. I almost feel sorry for poor Ichigo but then again...:)

Wow, this is amazing - you write the most wonderful smut. What's here so far is monitor-licking delicious, and I'm all but chewing on my fingernails as I wait for the rest to go up.
One minor detail: midway through chapter two, you write like a heartbeat that made him gasp and shutter with each pass. Unless I am gravely mistaken, "shutter" should be "shudder."

First off, holy fucking congrats on winning Nano!! I had to give up a week in, because my muse wandered off, taking my motivation with him.

Secondly, I read this on a whim earlier, and was SOOPER EXCITED to see it updated already. The impatient one in me wants you to just upload everything you have right now, and screw waiting a week each, and then I'll wait somewhat patiently for the rest of it to come out when you write it. The fangirl in me is squealing in excitement at UraIchi, IchiIshi, AND ShinjiIchi. ♥ You're a ... (woman? man?) person after my own heart. (forgive the insult. I can't recall your username right at the moment, not that it's indicative of gender in any way anyway.) Also, the muse has returned just in time for me to fail Nano horribly, and I can't stop thinking of what a wonderful hollow you've created with this. He's itching to take it and warp it. I apologize beforehand for possibly ganking your hollow idea. (not the sex part. You're doing a much better job of that than I could. But the spiny needles part.)

Your story has me interested, I look forward to seeing more of it. Please update soon.

I am officially intrigued. You have a really great first chapter and I can't wait to see where you take this. Please tell me you will be posting more of this soon.

And as you said this was your NaNo work, I hope you made your 50K goal