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I have been reading fanfiction for a very long time (close to 9 years now) and this is one of the hottest that I have ever read. Bravo, job well done! It is so rare to find blistering hot sex scenes coupled with excellent characterization and you have delivered both. Usually I'm guilty of skimming through the lemons having heard all of the euphemisms dozens of times before, but in this fic I have found myself devouring each scene, each sentence, each word.

The portrayal of D/s and bondage is extremely realistic. I love the fact that you have put in limitations (Ichigo's dislike of being gagged) and the characters are inherently themselves. The punishment because Shinji "forgot" to inform Ichigo of safewords was utterly satisfying in the best of ways. It was a great counterpoint to the fear in the previous chapter (although methinks that Shinji enjoyed himself too much).

There are so many places that this could have gone wrong but didn't. Ichigo could have come across as the village bicycle or the equivalent of a woman without a vagina, but instead I am anticipating each new pairing that you are dangling in front of us. The hollow poison didn't come across as a contrived and overdone plot device which also took a lot of skill. I said it before, but congratulations! It takes a very rare and talented author to pull something like this off so well.

Sorry about the rambling review, but it is so rare that I come across fic that compels me to write one that I cannot contain myself. I hope that you update quickly and that your plans for this fic come to fruition. I hope that inspiration stays with you and as a reader full of anticipation I hope that you update as soon as you are able.

All the best,
Mitzi

All the

Hello dear, I've been lurking around this story for awhile, but I must admit that I am kind of a hermit when it comes to reviewing, and extremely picky to boot, so something has to impress me to actually get me to review, because I know I personally don't like getting reviews for my own story unless the person was truly motivated to review. In short, though this isn't really short, I'm saying that I seriously enjoy your story and I find it rather compelling, and though it is filled with steamy smexiness (ha, eloquent), there is still that level of sophistication that proves that you have talent. plus, you use proper grammar, and who in the hell doesn't like that? Anyways, wonderful job dear, and one last question, after all the pairings will this story actually end with a particular pairing or no? ]

TillThatTime

Please update i am loving your story. Lol i will admit to being a grimmjow and ichigo fangirl but i like all of your pairings so far keep up the good work.

Chapter 8

This was absolutely... breathtaking. Seriously. I still can't catch my breath, and all I did was read it!

WOOOOO!!!!!! way to go

That was beyond hot.

She's definitely looking forward to this Grimm/Ichi love hotel. It sounds as if it's going to be a ball.

Just a note, you've completely skipped out on any completely focused UraxIchi scene. Which does break this girl's little heart...would you consider adding in a little something, just for the UraxIchi fans out there?

YAY!!! Im happy to see that you're back and ready for action! ^^ Its exciting and I think Im ready for whatever you throw at us, but until next time, See ya

That was very sweet. It's fun to see Ichigo get tormented, but he really does deserve to get some sweet sex too. I love what you've done so far, and I was very happy to see this story updated. Looking forward to more.

I know what you mean, just relaxing over break. I hate having to do homework then because I have no motivation. Thank you for updating, I really appreciate it.

Although Ichiishi isn't my favorite pairing, it was still yummy. I can't wait for the next chapter. Grimmichi :O~