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by crystalomnia

person Anon
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was incredibly hot, and they didn't even have sex. Wow. I can't wait to read your next chapter, update soon please.
person To lazy to sign in
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was hot, I like that you had anal beads in this one. Can't wait to see what Urahara has planned. Hopefully some spanking and maybe feather play.
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wooow. I dont know what to say but the fact that i like this story a lot and that Im in until the end. ^^ And two blonds and a red head are so hoooot! *drools at the thought of a bound Ichi* I'll see you next chapter!!!
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say that that I find your story extremely enjoyable and erotic....
Now, that being said, please excuse me as I pass out from blood loss via my nasal passages.
Thank you and have a pleasant day.
::GUSH::
::THUD::
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Six

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You'll never get anything more coherent out of me. Holy SHIT what a thing to wake up to! You're amazing. You're absolutely amazing. That was... LDSKFJlKJHVJKDYHUIYHKDS. And SLDKFJHKJVHBKJHVNCUYVIREH. Also, LHVKhVYHCV.
person satterb
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God...that was hotter than hell! Please, please, please update soon!
person Anise
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(6) Loved Urahara's reaction to Shinji not telling about the safe word, I have to admit that as I was reading earlier chapters I was wondering why Shinji didn't tell Ichigo about that. Still all the rest of it was simply delicious smut, I don't think there's really much more to be said about that chapter-great job! ^_^
person Anise
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(5) Loved the phone conversation, 'no i'm not a pervert', seriously who does he think he's kidding!
I'm not sure what to think of Shinji, he just seems to be so over powering that you wonder if Ichigo is doing something because he wants to or if he's just being talked into it. Also now with the addiction thrown in it's getting harder to tell what it is he truly wants to what he thinks he wants. I'm also guessing this would throw a wrinkle into Ishida and Ichigo getting together any time soon considering last time they had sex Ishida could have been seriously harmed. You were right when you called this a highschool drama, nothing seems to ever be easy with any of these guys. Great story so far not only is there very hot sex, there's also a rather interesting plot, with all of these things going on I can't wait to read more :)
person Afrieal
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh goddess...that was a pretty good light D/s scene even if you didn't have the usual safewords the general care was great. I can actually see Ichi being a good Top Rysh thinks he'd not be a good sub/bottom because of his dealings with his hollow and the rebirth of his powers when he was restrained and such (Yamma-Jii is snorting and telling us to stay out of his psych books) can't wait for the threesome stuff

Affie and Rysh
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, she officially can't wait until the next chapter.

You rock her world. Seriously.