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Interesting to see Ichigo and Uryuu getting closer. I can see him wanting to protect Ichigo no matter what. Very interested to see how this plays out. No idea what the tower itself is called. Sorry, no help there.

LOL. YAY!!! Nice chappies! ^^ Cant wait for more.
I'm always putting things off for whatever Im reading, like: food, water, bathroom breaks. lol.
But Im writing a fanfic... Its just slow going now can Im working alotta overtime, so ideas/plot bunnies are drying up and my muse has run away.
But I'll see ya next chapter!!!

Another great chapter!!! A short one but it doesnt matter because you update daily. So ish all cools. ^^ lol Again, Im going to say how much i love the plot. Ish teh awesomest(i dont think thats a word). And if you're tired of my continous praise get over it. ^^

Oh the Shirosaki|Shinji scene had me worried for a second. I was thinking that Shiro was going to run amuck. It woulda been funny though. And poor poor perverted Shinji. I cant wait for more. ^^ Can I be your biggest fan?

Oh this has been such fun so far. Loved the last chapter. I don't think Shiro gets out enough.

Priceless, that had to be my fav scene (the hallway) I could just see it and I was cheering Shiro on XD

I couldn't stop laughing when you mentioned 'the look'! Urahara's parental look was described so well. I use that look with the kids at school but mine usually translates as 'I-know-you're-up-to-something-and-when-I-find-out-someones-in-detention!'

I swear this story just gets better and better XD More please :)

(9) I loved Shiro in this and oddly enough I don't feel all that sorry for Shinji, he's just so much fun to play with ;) I'm glad you found a way to get Ichigo out of SS but that does raise the question of whether the damage that was done to him is reversed now or is it more that the process stalled where it was? Of course I could just be getting slightly ahead of you and that's what we're going to eventually find out in the story and I just need to learn the art of patience, that's not going to be easy ;)
This was a great chapter I really liked it, especially the ending and I can't wait for the next update! ^_^

I love how everyone's reaction to Ichigo is their awe at how short he his, you would think that it would be more about the fact that he's shaped like a girl *snicker* I had been wondering if Mayuri's plan would work if Ichigo just went to SS did what he had to do and then went home, it didn't seem like enough time for the whole plan to happen so I'm glad you addressed that in this last chapter. It seems despite the fact that Mayuri is a raving lunatic he's actually thought this plan threw, I was kind of hoping that would be the loophole. I wonder if there is a reason behind Mayuri wanting the top spot or is it just purely a lust for power, honestly what is it with shinigami and a need for power and control *rolls eyes*
Thanks for the long reply I love reading what you have to say, sorry my review was kind of short but my internet's been acting sketchy and I just want to make sure that I get this done before it decides to cut out again (stupid technology) I hope it's not serious but just as a warning if I don't review a chapter it's not because I don't want to but more like I can't. All that aside I'm interested to see what's going to happen next and if anyone is going to start to figure things out, cant's wait for the next chapter! :)

Yes, I even love your story when the authors note is longer than the chapter XD

To prove it, it is now midnight and I have to be up in 6 hours to go to work but I couldn't go to bed till I'd read this ^-^
Ok so it might be a little weird if yama-ji were to get a crush on her but most of the others I could live with XP
Ok, really gotta get some sleep. Looking forward to the next chapter.

(6) You're extremely quick on the updating, that's not a complaint by the way I like you updating as much as you want! :) As for the story and Mayuri, it's an interesting idea for taking over SS but I'm assuming(hoping) there's a flaw that he hasn't considered so it doesn't resort to that. I loved the captain's meeting and the reactions of everyone, it'll get even more interesting though once he starts meeting up with people one on one and seeing their individual reactions, him and Renji should be interesting :)
I read your author's notes and realized that we're similar in being all over the place when it comes to pairings, I like ish/ich and bya/ren as much as the next fangirl but they aren't my one and onlys. Actually with Renji I like him with Shuuhei or Kira, or better yet just throw all of them together into a threesome *drools* I also love the idea of Ukitake and Byakuya together, I like the idea of Byakuya with someone who could easily stand up to him. I think that's what's great with Bleach there's just so many to chose from which you seem to be taking full advantage of in this story, that's part of the fun :) Like with Shinji, I think it's partially him wanting to torment Ishida and/or Ichigo and partly lust ;)
I do realize that I'm extremely weird in that I like to respond to author notes so I apologize for rambling on but sometimes I just can't help myself but I'll stop now so you can stop reading this and go back to what your supposed to be doing-writing the next chapter (or sleeping) ^_^

Nice chapter, and I must admit, "Why are you short" was/is a great line. And the chicken thing was too. I laughed so hard I cried. ^^ And you spell Toushirou like I do too. And I do mess it up every now and then, but its mostly the Hitsuguya part that I forget the U.
But again nice chapter and the plot is amazing and I just cant wait for more!!! Even though Im pressed for time and Im late for work right nows, I just had to read your newest chappie. ^^ Now my day is made! I can make it through 8 hours without fanfiction(I should work on my own story).
See ya next chapter!!!