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for With a Silent Step

by YamiBakura

schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay for updating frequently XD

My fav line is 'The soutaichou's desk was legendary for it's contents; an entire chicken was once found under a pile of papers, and people still snickered about it occasionally.' That brought about a giggle ^-^ The fact that even yama-ji is slightly messy is just perfect.

You just keep throwing those suiters in, pretty soon the entire male population of serietei will be after Ichigo, which might be kinda interesting XD

Oh and I completely get the Hitsugaya thing, I really hate spelling his name because you can guarantee that you'll miss something so I just type 'Shiro, so much easier ;)
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. I like this story. Its cute and something new for me. Girl!Ichigo... IchiIshi... *fangirling around room* I love it. And I feel sorry about your lack of sleep. I understand your pain. ^^
"With a Silent Step" seems to ne building and progressing beautifully and I look forward to more from you.
Dont work to hard either! See ya next chapter.
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Two chapters again, yay :)

Mayuri (you're right, it's just easier ^-^) really is evil, that's quite the plan and so believable too. Don't worry about the short chapter, it works. If it had been any longer it may have spoilt the effect XD

I can't wait for more but don't become too sleep deprived, trust me, after a while you end up falling asleep at the computer and that can really hurt you arms ^~^ XD
person Anise
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe that you turned Ichigo into a girl *snicker* I don't think I actually believed you when I read that in your email. It's funny how it seems that it's just the outside that's changed and he's still acting like Ichigo, it's just so much more amusing that way especially considering his penchant for freaking out ^_^ I have to admit that I'm usually on the fence about the whole turning male characters into females but since there was a reason as to why Ichigo's a girl it doesn't seem as random as it does in some stories. I can't help but think that this is definitely going to be a fun read but on a serious note, I also want to see how they deal with Mayuri and his plans, especially since I'm sure Ichigo doesn't want to find himself a girl forever.
By the way I loved the email you sent me and I would never think it creepy that you would send me one, that's why I leave my email I figure if I've got things to say about the story you should be able to respond to it plus that pretty much guarantees you reviews from me in the future, I'll be looking forward to the next update! :)
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh...so...funny XD

That last bit had me in stitches, I almost fell out of my chair. Poor Ichigo, it's just not her week :)

Thank you so much for the dedication XD I love reviewing, I know how nice it is to find out what people like about your work. I am really enjoying this story, I can't wait to find out what happens next.
(And I totally agree about Draco's work, a must read!)

And thank you for the double update *claps hands in glee* XD
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really, really good, I'm dying to know why Ichi is mentioned in the notebook and what exactly Kurotsuchi is planning to do with him XD

Can't wait till you update :)
person Anise
schedule December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This really was a fabulous start to the story I even loved Shinji in this (the little pervert), only he could completely fail at his job of protecting Ichigo and blame it all on Ishida. I have to admit that when they made mention of a bracelet I thought that it would be Ishida that Mayuri was actually after especially considering his interest in the Quincy and while I'm glad Ishida is okay, poor Ichigo is most certainly not :(
You've definitely caught my interest just in this first chapter and I will certainly be looking forward to the upcoming chapters ^_^

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