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for A Mistaken Past

by LadyKyou

person Anon
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved your update, I hope you let Byakuya soften to Tatsuki soon. As for the Orihime pairing...Orihime/Renji is a good one...or even Orihime/Shuuhei...you could even spice things up and pair her with Ukitake...you've paired Tatsuki with Byakuya...why not...She and Tatsuki would have something in common and Ukitake's sweet caring nature would work well with Orihime. She loves to take care of people so why not pair her with him. It hasn't been done (just like Tat/Bya) and it would be interesting. Anyway...great chapter and please update soon.
person alex
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cool!
person teresa
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love it!
person Ladylara
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was scary. Who the heck was that? Man I cant wait for the next chapter. Nice work
person erynn
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good job so far! well written and entertaining.
keep it up!
oh and in my opinion you should keep the end pairing tatsuki/byakuya.
person erynn
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very interesting.. that was one weird 'dream'
person Ladylara
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, interesting developments. I am curious to see what is going on. Why can she not go out after dark? Why does he care? cant wait to see the next chapter.
person Byakuyafan
schedule December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you make things better between Bya/Tat...I like your story with this pairing...And I believe throwing in Hisagi as someone to help Byakuya see the error in his ways is perfect. I hope you pair Hisagi and Orihime up that would be sweet. I'm not a big Orihime fan, but, there is something about putting the two of them together that makes sense. Anyway, great story...keep up the great work and I look forward to your next update.
person alex
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome! keep going!
person Anon
schedule December 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM