rate_review Reviews

surprisingly good pairing! i love this story so far. you're a really good writer.

Interesting!

Man I guess that went pretty well. But now I feel for them being stuck in the same household. This should be interesting. Cant wait for more.

Keep going please Im curious who else will be interested in Tatsuke. Since one of the pairing is Tat/???, maybe it be Zaraki, hes hawt.

update!

Kudos indeed a wonderful story with a bright and innovative new pair that actually focuses on a shinagami who hardly ever has proper justice done to him. Your story is amazing and easily among the best on aff i await further chapters with great enthusiasm.

Wow this story just gets better with each chapter. I cant wait to read more.

I'm a little confused. In the summary it says this story is Tat/Bya and Ori/Ulq. Is that a typo or is Orihime eventually going to ditch Ishida and get together with Ulquiorra? (Assuming you continue the story of course).

Also, you may want to add Ichiho/Rukia to the summary where you list pairings - since this first chapter contains a whole lot of Ichigo/Rukia (I'd say at least as much as there is Tatsuki/Byakuya, save for the actual sex act) and many people (me included) find the IchiRuki pairing really unpleasant. (It's always nice to have a warning so we can brace ourselves beforehand...). Unless of course, you end up having Ichigo and Rukia break up later on in the story and that's only a temporary pairing - sadly, that didn't appear to be the direction you're going with them.

Finally, I love Byakuya x any female pairings, and it's always nice to see Tatsuki get some love. If you do end up continuing the story, I hope they manage to build a relationship based on more than just sex... it sounds like it will be difficult to accomplish emotional attachment between these two (Byakuya being who he is and Tatsuki being a commoner human) but perhaps Byakuya's highly developed sense of honor will come into play (maybe Tatsuki will get preggers or similar).)

This was awesome!!! I love Tat/anybody stories! I can't wait for the update to see where this story goes.

Smut first chapter is a plus. If you would consider pairing options would you think about Tatsuke and Grimmjow. Bya is alright, he's a hottie, but she is spunky so a guy with an attitude is more her style. I hope she forgives Orihime.