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We have no words...that was wonderful. I hope Grimmy will be able to deal with the almost attack, sometimes those are the ones that bite you hardest. Keep up the great work we look foreward to the next installment.

Rysha and Affie

Oh man! Ulquiorra was PISSED! Did Nnoitra end up doing anything to him or not? I love Stark...he's just so laid back. Thanks for the great update!

you...are...the...most amazing...author...EVER!!!!!!!! i swear, this chapter was brilliant!!! :D :D :D :D

i don't know how you manage to do it, but' it was sooooooooo good, seriously

loved the idea of nnoitra getting burned (pun intended XD) that was totally awesome, and ulquiorra...FUCKING AMAZING! :D

poor grim, but there was so much sweetness that i don't really care

i'm anxious to see the relationship between halibel and stark

keep up the great work! please please please update soon!

and...i'll be completely honest with you, i'm not too fond of OCs, but since you're the author, i'm SURE it'll be great, so i'll read it XD

you evil, evil author...D: HOW COULD YOU????

just kidding ^^ the fight was very well written, and grimmy was totally in character

poor grimm though, i hope ulqiourra comes to the rescue! ...hope...

:D awesome job, loved this chapter so much, there were so many conflicting emotions and...halibel and stark, *wink wink* their interactions were right on the dot!

XD keep up the great work

Oh good lord poor Grimmy-kun is gonna be in trouble...altho this does mean that the slimball is going to be munched since he went after Uli-san's mate...great job a true rollercoaster. Af's worn out she had to post not only the latest chapter for OB but the ones that got dropped as well *sigh* oh well at least they're in. keep up the great writing

Rysha and Affie

I just read this entire series for the first time and I adore it. You portray everyone very well and as they evolve you take us along for the ride through the character's view. This is one of my favorite pairings in the Bleach fandom and I was thrilled to find such a well written one.

I really can't wait for more from you, especially this story as I want to see Nnoitra get his ass kicked for even thinking about putting his hands on what Ulquiorra considers his. Die bitch, die!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

Somehow, I don't see Nnoitra making it out of this alive.

Oh Shit! Please don't let him hurt poor Grimm! I think that fight scenes have to be the hardest thing to write and I liked how you handled it. Thanks for the cliffhanger of an update this time...lol!

love where this is going and am loving different perspectives.your style is so unique and real...its like you know the characters personally.oh by the way, if you were ever to write a story about stark, who'd you pair him with?

You asked if we thought you were putting too much sex in this story...I don't think so at all. You have added alot of sexual tension, but that's always a good thing. I think that this story seems to be moving faster than your other stories, but it's still a great story. Ulquiorra and Grimmjow are my alltime favorite pairing. As I've said before, I love this universe you have created and will continue to look forward to every update. Thanks...you're the best!