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for Beauty and the Beast

by Rockyshores

schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Noo, aww, Kenpachi *hugs him*. You're a sexy monster at any rate :P

Haha, I think you're far too good a writer to fall into only using the lines and not putting a spin on it, but I just thought I'd mention it (annoys me sometimes when a writer uses a film like this in a fandom and only uses the lines from it and stuff, if you know what I mean? ... I don't even know what I mean :P )

Continue soon :D
person Alicyon
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"NU KITTEH! MAI POT PIE! MAAAAAHM!"

I love Cartman, he's amazing. xD
Seriously, imagining Grimmjow fighting a panther for a goose just made my day.
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love all your stories, you really do have some of the best ideas, and you're so dedicated, too :D However, with this story, I'm not sure whether I like it as much as others.

The idea is wonderful and really original, and completely suits Kenpachi, but there's always a trap with using Beauty and the Beast in another fandom - alot of authors end up just using lines from the movie/story and don't incorporate their own... thing (I'm so bad with words) in to it, and I noticed it a bit more with this chapter than the other two. I reckon maybe you should try adding original thoughts and feelings to the characters, put more in it? Maybe explain why Ichigo's crying, because he's so tough he would usually never cry, even in this situation, but if you let us in on his emotions it might give us a clearer view or something...

Haha, I dunno. This wasn't meant to be taken in a mean way, I really love your stories and this one's just as promising, but I think it'd be even better if you take on at least one of these suggestions. And wow, I've wrote a lot, I'll just shut up now ;)

Great story, hope you continue!
person Yakumo
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love how you made Kenpachi look as a beast. <3
person Yakumo
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XDDD your version of Belle's reprise is awesome!!! This story is full of win.
person Zoshia
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am very interested in this story. It makes me smile how you put it in so well with my favorite Disney movie, I think it's quite clever. Grimmjow makes a good Gaston. ^,^ Hope you update soon!
person satterb
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fun to read! Thanks for the update! Looking forward to the next one!
person RaeLyn
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter...*waits on edge for the next* I especially loved the idea of Ichigo setting the flowers on fire...ahhh sweet fire
person a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h.
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol ^-^ I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. More, please!
person Bianca D.
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the part when Grimmjow mentioned that he knew a witch that could cast a spell on Ichigo to get him pregnant. That was just too funny. I also liked all the characters as the household objects. I really like this concept adapted for these characters, keep up the great work.