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for Inoue’s Naughty Dreams

by AbaresDaArk

schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hehehe... this is so awesome and so naughty! *wink* Though I am still searching my braincells who the guy is, dark skinned? hmmm *thinking pose*
schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Uhm, are the kitties, Ichi and Grimmjow... LOL. heheeh Naughty! A threesome huh. I am still figuring out who the bunny was. hmmm...?
schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What happened to the kitties!?! And I wanted to know how it went about. :(
schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so that's where the kitty action went, lol. Cute ;)
schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
arggh... I hate it when people tease... ;)
person Erosu787
schedule November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to guess the kitties are Ichigo and Ishida. At first the first couple chapters were weird with the Mr. Bunny and his carrot but now with Ichigo involved I cant hardly wait.
Keep on going
person moodymel
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you ended it there. That's so mean. I need more.
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story thus far. Warping inoue's child-like mind into something like that takes creativity. Bravo! I agree with the other reviews: Mr Bunny = Chad, Orange kitty = Ichigo, Blue Kitty = Ishida. If a lion shows up, I'll know it's Kon. I'm not sure what animal Urahara would be. Maybe a monkey. Anyway, I look forward to reading more when you update.
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
While this story has potential, you might want to run a spell checker over it before you post. I won't offer to beta, too busy, but even reading it aloud before you post it can help pick up errors.

Now, what will happen with Ichigo? And is the dark Mr Bunny, Chad? That would be a change.
person Ladylara
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Gosh! Wow what a greeting... Heh heh heh, poor Ichigo... or maybe I shouldnt feel so bad for him... Thanks for the unexpected extra chapter. Yay!