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for Misguided Manipulation

by Crya2Evans

person Anon
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*gasp*
only one more chapter and then it ends? But...but...there's so much more that can be written, I'm sure!
and, although I'm not in a het-faze at the moment, I think I'll read that new story of yours :3
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Stark left, and ss wants to limit Ichigo's power for their own safety...I'm hoping there's a plot twist in the next chapter, where Yamamoto get's his ass handed to him on a silver plater.
I really do
person Emyrei
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm hoping Ichigo will find Stark and drag him back to him by his....ears...*cough*

But Ichigo doesn't have SOME allies within the Gotei 13....he has like....80% worth of allies.
Yamamoto wouldn't stand a chance.

And do not think that I was not going "ohnoez" when you announced that the next chapter will be the finale.
Because I did.
person satterb
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was beautifully written, and Kisuke's right, Ichigo will never give up what he wants. Starks not saving him the trouble at all. It was still sad and sweet, and I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm really sad that this fic is coming to an end. I think it's been one of your best works so far. Thank you for keeping Ichigo in character...it seems to be harder to do than anyone would expect given what other fics are out there!
person Ranna
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Urahara's right. Ichigo's not gonna understand.
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy this story, I must say. But, the Monty Python reference this chapter just made me laugh. Just wanted to say that.
person alisteal
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww They really are so so damn cute together!
person Kuromei
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*ponders* -_______- Yeah, I can't see Stark as the kind of person (Espada... whatever) that'd say "I love you." Actions speak louder than words, after all. *giggle* X3

But what now? Now both Stark and Ichigo have Aizen after their heads. And if the other Espada ever decide to gang up on 'em... *shiver* X(

Mya~! I'm really enjoying this fic, even though I'm only up to vol. 24 of the manga. lol X3
person Emyrei
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The "you could hear Szayel's pants drop"-part was made out of pure win.
Everyone wants Ichigo. But Stark is the only one who gets to have him.
Yay XD
person Anon
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
seriously...I thought Stark had killed Barragan until that line about him escaping....
can you imagine my reaction? it was like this--> weeeeeeeeeeeeeee(reads the escape part)eeeeeeenooooooooooooo!!!!!
oh, stark...yes, you should've killed him while you had the chance.

and on a sidenote: yes!!! top-Ichigo is win!!

and also, where's the swearword?
--->the old bastard growled in surprise, drawing back. “What the (it's not here) do you think you're doing?”
Barragan swearing?=awesome
person Ranna
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Stark is possessive. Who'da thunk? I'm sad we won't get to see more of his personality in the series. He'll probably get killed off.