rate_review Reviews

Oh wow, this is take two of this review. I have no idea what happened to the first one I wrote, but I'll try to remember what I was talking about.
Oh yeah. You should totally make this an epic fic. No six-shot. Sixty-six, maybe, but this story just has so freakin much potential. You have really caught Ichigo and Stark together and it is reads so well and easily. And this is your best Urahara too. I love Minutes to Midnight but Kisuke was a little too goofy. But not here. You've got him down just great. And the chemistry between Ichigo and Stark is hot. From their first kiss in chapt. 2 I was hooked. Stark is obviously stronger but you don't have Ichigo as this whimpering submissive and its awesome. And Stark is caught in his charisma along with that hot body, its so freakin believable!(well as believable as fanfiction about manga/anime characters can be, you know what I mean) And to see how they could get through the war and afterwards and how all the friends deal would be an awesome read. Sigh
Just keep up the great work and I can't wait til next week. Just think about elongating this story. Or at least a sequal? Pretty Please? :) Whatever you decide you know me and everybody else will still be reading you stuff :P

Do you have the Espada get aroused when their masks are kissed or touched? Maybe I read that somewhere else but when you had that line about Stark-san shivering when his mask got played with it made me wonder. >.>;

Renji, Rukia, Orihime and especially Kisuke are exceptionally fleshed out in this fic. They are so spot on to their characters that it's almost scary. The dialog is believable, and I'm also glad to see that you aren't going to make Stark and Ichigo all mushy and girly. It's one of my favorite things about this fic. Keep up the outstanding work. I love your "update" days! I read all your fics! Thanks!

great fic, can't wait to see more.

OH NO! Stupid AFF is messing up my comments...they've been showing up blank on some other stories too. I don't remember what I was trying to say then..>_< But anyway, I loved this chapter.

I was thinking, Uquiorra playing fetch with Aizen wouldn't be that unrealistic in canon....I could see it happen XD
ah, sweet imagery...
and yay for erotic smex-time! Aggresive-Ichigo is slightly more facinating than Submissive/weak/undecisive-Ichigo.
He's been portrayed that way in fics too often in my opinion, so this Ichigo is refreshing ;3
Do I detect the possibility of Ichigo topping in the future?

Oooooo~h! What's Stark going to do now? 83 He can't betray Aizen, and something tells me he won't be able to betray Ichigo's, either. X3 Eeee! I can't wait for the next chapter! XD This fic is just so cool, I can't stand it! X3 *hugs*

I think I might have drooled a bit. So undignified.
That's what your porn does to me.
Huzzah.

You know...I think Ulquiorra has a personality. I can imagine him being really really quirky.
Quirky like Szayel. And he knows it too. But he hides it really well.
And that's all part of his quirkyness.

i am loving this just as much as MTM. I was totally suprised to see Ichigo take the initiative. I didn't see it coming. Please keep up the great work. I look forward to more.

Have I ever told you how much I adore the way you write Aizen? Because I think I've gushed over it before. Regardless—I love your Aizen. He's perfect. And now I also love Stark, something I'm going to blame entirely on you.

Can't wait for an update!

-Mizu.B