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for Misguided Manipulation

by Crya2Evans

person Yaoi_Vixen
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter; loved the smut! And possesive Ichigo =P. Can't wait for the next chapter =D
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was so simple and easy to read, yet so full of lovely imagery. I think Stark's PoV was a wonderful way to show how he begins to understand Ichigo.
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I adore this pairing <3333
person alisteal
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really hope they'll be more posted soon!! I'm really enjoying this pairing
person Kuromei
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol And there goes Stark, twisting himself deeper and deeper into the web of Ichigo's charisma. XD It doesn't help that the kid gives him food-for-thought concerning Aizen. X3

Hee hee! I'm really liking this fic! XD I can't wait for the next update. ^w^ *hugs*
person Anon
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
enjoy it I did!!!
I'm seriously hooked on this fic now x3
and I'm in love with your portrayal of Stark.

It's a tidbit early in the morning for me, so I'm afraid I don't have anything more productive to say
sorry
person Emyrei
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't mind Stark POV. Stark is awesome.
I love the banter between him and Ichigo. You manage to keep them pretty much in character.
At least Ichigo. Sadly, Stark has had very little screen time (and page time) so he hasn't really given us much to go on.
But still, I like how you write him.
I also liked the Urahara & Stark interaction. Urahara can be so confusing sometimes<3. :P
person satterb
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you're keeping it one POV...Ichigo's easy enough to read anyway and a second point of view is added, most of the time it only ends up reiterating any interaction between characters. Thank you. I love your Stark. I love his outlook and his candid attitude. I also like that he's lusting after Ichigo, and I can't wait till he gets a little loving!
person Yaoi_Vixen
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can't wait to see how their relationship progresses =) Update soon!
person Lore
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and especially Stark!! Hope you update soon!