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for The Ultimate Betrayal

by Strailo

schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting. I would really like to see more of this.
person gollumsfriend
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Um......why did you post chapter 1 a second time and call it chapter 2??
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
why it the 2 chapters the same?????
person lara5170
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was good but not long enough. I have to admit that I really like the idea of Ichigo having really long hair(I have a thing for guys with long hair & I've always believed his character would look better with long hair). I'm also dying to know who the guy was that betrayed him???
person Miko Vampire
schedule July 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
When Ichigo comes back, he should come with Grimmjow who took Ichigo as his mate, what could be better payback than having a former enemy loving and treating Ichigo better than the cheating bastard!!!!!!!
person autumn
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the oneshot,but I am wondering if you can expand the story to a before and after. Otherwise keep up the good work.
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like this. i hope you keep writing. my vote goes to a hitsugaya/renji threesome with ichigo. keep up the good work please.
person Anon
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aizen (and Ichimaru) would be awesome.
person Pickles
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm a big fan of Ren/Ichi, so that;s the couple I'm gonna choose~! C:
person Mimori
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i would love to see a renji and ichigo pairing. they are my favorite. an so far i like the story, it's very interesting and it leaves you in suspense for more. which these kinds of stories are always my favorite.