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for The Ultimate Betrayal

by Strailo

schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is good, sad, but good. I'd think it would make an excellent story if you were to continue it.
schedule March 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok i think you really need to finnish this because there is a lot more to this. i can tell