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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was brilliant hun! I'm sure he'll love it! It was so hot, even if I don't know the story all that well, I love it! What I liked was that at times your sentences didn't seem so much sentences used in fiction writing, they seemed to me like they were structured a little more like poetry, like a fragment of the sentence would seem to have more of a hidden meaning than simply, "He walked through the door." if you catch my drift. Anyhoo, keep it up! I want to go read that other one you did now. I'll see you next week!
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woot!! That was violent & still smexy!!