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for (I'm So Sick)

by kimboskerov

person JWM
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, though I suggest changing the title of the fic. Normally all lowercase spelling titles suggest poor writing, so I nearly skipped this one. For pairings, could I suggest Ichigo/Orihime, Chizuru/Orihime, Rukia/Orihime, Matsumoto/Orihime, and most importantly request that you keep writing?
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that you had this idea. When I first saw the Kon/Orihime pairing I thought that you had come to the same conclusion that I did. Kon in Ichigo's body w/ Orihime (even if she knows its fake she can look at him and pretend its real). But this was new and very nice and diffrent. You have a lot of potential to explore with this and I hope that you do.

Hell I would love to see Kon using Renji's or Hitsugya's empty bodies to be with Orihime. Kon has such a sweet nature I'm sure Orihime would like him once she got to know him. If you think about it she's never really had the one to one time w/ Kon that the others have.

My only critisim is that you should captialize the title.