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April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wahh sorry for the late review!! school the past days are... damn intense. X_X
again, two great chapters! XD I love how stark's just able to sleep like that XD
"... is that your zanpaktou?" LOL. BEST LINE EVER!! I was so sad for the chappie to end, so update again soon!!! >O<
... Yammy in a tutu. LOL.
again, two great chapters! XD I love how stark's just able to sleep like that XD
"... is that your zanpaktou?" LOL. BEST LINE EVER!! I was so sad for the chappie to end, so update again soon!!! >O<
... Yammy in a tutu. LOL.
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April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter had me smiling, Lilinette is definately like Hiyori XD
I like the length of the chapters, any longer and I'd never find time to read them.
I look forward to the next chapter XD
I like the length of the chapters, any longer and I'd never find time to read them.
I look forward to the next chapter XD
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think Stark should change his mind and totally share with Grimmjow. That would be delicious! This was so funny...Ichigo's so up-tight!
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
These shortish chapters are nice. Ichigo could be pretty creative in the way he wakes up Stark.
Hmm...maybe Aizen is trying to set Ichigo up with the 'stay close' comment. He is evil after all! Stark is so mello its funny. Poor Lilinette being replaced! She acts kinda like Karin...I like this fic!
Hmm...maybe Aizen is trying to set Ichigo up with the 'stay close' comment. He is evil after all! Stark is so mello its funny. Poor Lilinette being replaced! She acts kinda like Karin...I like this fic!
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April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the pace you're going now. The chapter lengths are perfect in my opinion. I'm still loving this story very much. "bastard-sama" still makes me laugh. xD
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I prefer what ever you prefer to do. I would think that it would be hard to form writing habits around your readers demands. Sometimes you put up a long chapter, and sometimes not. It's not always the volume that matters, but the content. I just want you to write what is relevant to the story and end the chapters where they need to be ended. Knowing you, it's usually an evil cliffie, but it can't be helped. Thanks for the update, and I look forward to the next.
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoop! lol, Strawberry pillow!! XD Cute. I like the short, frequent chapters myself! WRITE MORE SOON!! :3 (Not sure if u got the first one, I'f u did, sorry!)
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh I liked this chapter a lot, Stark got to cuddle with Ichigo ehehehehe
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay its so cute so far, cant wait for more... you rock my lame ass socks... o.O
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April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha that sandwhich sounds just terrible ... ew -_- and now Ichigo is a pillow ^__^
Length vs. frequency ... what is a very hard choice to make... I am leaning more towards frequency over lenght ...
Length vs. frequency ... what is a very hard choice to make... I am leaning more towards frequency over lenght ...