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for Death and the Strawberry

by Rockyshores

schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kool~! XD I can't wait for the Lemon!! :3 My only consern is the fact that there doesn't seem to be a real conflict yet. I can see the fact that their moght be other mates in the fiture as a minor conflict or side conflict, but I haven't really seen a major one. Like, which side is Ichigo going to be on? Aizen's? SS's? (lol) Neather? Please tell me soon, beacuse I feel that it is lacking anything substancle at the moment.

Thanks,
~Kera
person Yakumo
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XD "I have something you can eat." You write the best innuendos.
person Yakumo
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I'm so glad Ichigo and Stark weren't separated when he became the king and went to the new castle. I'd be crying if I was separated from Stark. xD
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kool~! lol, I can't wait to see Ichi's powers! And I can't wait for mor Stark/Ichigo! And to see what the shimigami (sp?) and humans are gonna do!! WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE! XD
person Tiramisu
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story....2 of my fave bleach characters in one story!! Woot!! Thank you!!
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow you have such an imagination I cant wait to find out what Ichigo's powers are =D
person ShadowofLight
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hollow King and Shinigami king. ichigo is walking a tight-walk rope between both words as I see it and I would like to see Grimmy jsut try and take ichigo agaisnt his will. If the vasto lordes and Stark don't get to him first, oh there won't be enough of him to go to hell. Anyway I really like this fic and can't wait to see how this war ends. Ans Aizen should really watch himself. With the king now revealed, well why would a Hollow follow a ex-shinigami captain-tunred traitor when they're much more powerful king has returned? Sorry don't mean to sound like I'm making an arguement but this is gonna get very interesting indeed.
schedule June 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like how you gave Ichigo his own world for being king. It makes sense that if the Shinigami King has his own dimension to live in, shouldn't it apply to the Hollow King as well?
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, poor Aizen. I hope, in the end, he at least gets to keep Gin <3!

Ooooh, Stark has a new napping/sexually torturing Ichigo area! I cannot wait to see what they get up to in the King's chamber. I can't wait for more, loved the development!
person gaara89
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lols, Grimmjow's hilarious. He just can't take no for an answer. Sucks to be Aizen though, all his "subjects" are getting fed up with him now that they have a real king of their own. Looking forward to the next chapter, as always!



~Reigh~