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If you want you can send the next chapter to me for editing. I'm editing for a few stories right now, I mostly edit for people who's first language is not english...so since you are quite fluent, your story will be easier than theirs. I believe my email is right under my name on the review. Good work, by the way! Can't wait for the next one!


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I'm sorry if I came off bitchy in my last review. It was just a bad time for me, and I didn't take time to be politic about it.

I just have one question about this chapter, with Aizen. He said they'd allow Ichigo's family to live, but telling him to make them Hollows... isn't he telling Ichigo to personally kill them? They can't live AND be hollows, right?

I try to review all of your chapters when I can, so you can count on me to say something about each chapter. ^_^; Now for my comments on this one: I loved how you had Stark falling asleep at the end..that's typical Stark. xDD Keep up the good work. ^_^

Aww that was sexy! I love this story cant wait for more. xD

I think that it was good. I do however think that ichigo and stark are moving kinda fast in their relationship. All in all great story.

Whoop! ^^^ <--(Happy Alien) lol, I really like this story. Though, I can't wait till you get in to the deep, dark, secritive part of the plot that I just know is comming!!

Also, the resson I think less people reviewed is beacuse the story had started to get slow, and some people lost intrest. You made this chaptermuch better though! I really enjoyed the sumt!! ^///^ lol, WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!! :3

That was so sweet! I loved it! Great job, I can't wait to see what you do next!

You're not doing anything wrong. The story is good, especially since you're building up their sexual relationship from the ground up instead of plowing right into intercourse like a lot of other writers do. Sometimes when stories get into later chapters, readers just forget to review. It happens. Sometimes we just forget, I know I always do. So what ends up happening is that you'll get random numbers of reviews on any given chapter. If you were doing something wrong that made people not want to read, you'd definitely have at least one flame. So if you don't, then you're good. Great chapter by the way, I'll be looking forward to the next one.


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Maybe everyone was waiting for this chapter? Not a full lemon but close enough :) I like this part, it gives food for thought and I just wonder about Ishin and the girls. I mean how are they gonna take seeing Ichigo as he is now? Anyway i like it and I will always like masaki, I just hate how she died too damn early. Yay for uyou updating!! :D

Delicious! It's the perfect thing to read right before bed (ah, sweet dreams...) Is Stark going to accompany him to the KaraKura town?

Most Importantly, what do you think Ichigo's favorite play is? (Mine is Midsummer's Night Dream, btw) Has Grimmjow been tamed?