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for Death and the Strawberry

by Rockyshores

person Tiramisu
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are doing great!! Thank You!!
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, how cute! Stark can't even say 'the four-lettered word.' He so deserves it. They are so sweet together!

I feel bad for Stark, that's so sad. I want to hug him...Ichigo too, and Grimmjow, and.... Anyways, I hope Ichigo can make Stark feel again *squee!*
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoop! ^^ Another awsome chapter!! I LOVED the quote "You don't have to understand, emotions aren't meant to be understood. It is just something you feel. If you could explain them then they would be thoughts, not feelings.” I think it was just perfect!!! :3 WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!! XD *Hugz*
person Yakumo
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Purring Stark made me smile..<3 Thank you for that!
person Yellow
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So sweet! I can't wait to see what happens next! I love this story!
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This fic is hilarious! I love it!
person ShadowofLight
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, I'm still trying to learn more about Hollows and arrancers and such. This is a good chapter and well, I jsut hope for the best with ichigo. Stark really does care and heaven help any bastard that tries to take 'strawberry' away from him :)
schedule May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not one of your best, I'm afraid. Like, how in the world is Nel in any position to give orders? If they're preparing to attack Karakura, then Nnitora would have already betrayed her with Sayzel. Ichigo's already a hollow and an arrancar, so he never helped her return. Is she just there so Halbel can be a lesbian? She's already got a harem of fraccion, she doesn't need anachronistic-woman to be there too.

also... Hyouka? wtf?
schedule May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay cute loved this chapter too. wow keep up the Fantastical job ~_^
person Yakumo
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, nice little make out (I think you could call it that?) scene between Stark and Ichigo. Also, I'm glad that you had Ichigo's mom in this chapter. She's awesome. <3