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by liralen

person Anise
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved Giving Grace and how well you made these two work together so I'm really looking forward to this new story :) One of the things that stands out right away is the conversation that Ukitake and Hisagi have on what to expect between them. So often in bdsm fics they leave that part out and yet it's probably one of the most important parts of this kind of play. I also liked that surprise of Shuuhei never bottoming before, although I did wonder for a second if he's in love with Kira why wouldn't he save that for him. But I do understand why he would trust Ukitake and really is there anyone better to experiment with than him ;) This looks to be just as hot and steamy as the first one and can't wait for the update ^_^
person Darkephoenix
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Huzzah! More to the story. I'm thoroughly enjoying this.
person Darkephoenix
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully done. I truly enjoy your work.
person Yakumo
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I laughed when Rukia said that Ishida was a rabbit. XD I'm already loving this story. Your work is awesome. <3