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June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw! That was cute! Nice work I am definitely liking this story so far. Update soon!
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June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There are too many sexy choices for the threesome but Sousuke or Shinji would be my two choices i cant pick between those two ~_^ Gin wolud be hot too damn so would Kisuke damn I cant choose. This story is very sexy =D i love Ichigo and Grimmjow!
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May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very fun to read :) loved it. My only suggestion is to maybe tone down the cussing a bit? But thats it :) it was very fun to read!! Great job ;D.
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May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued. Though I think you should go back and put spaces between the paragraphs, it was a little hard to read. Otherwise, good job building things up. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow very hot and ichi just had to ruin the moment
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not bad for a first try. Good work. I'm looking forward to more from you. The only thing is that you might want to put some spaces between the paragraphs, because it's kind of hard to read.
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