rate_review Reviews

more sex, less talking...

You know, this was a very complex chapter *grins* but I can't help but feel sorry for Shuuhei (well, he is my favorite character, after all). It seems like he's constantly searching for someone to fill a hole (no, not that one, lol) inside him, and can't...
Maybe I'm reading too deeply into things, but that's just me...
Anyhow, I'm very happy you updated, as I love this story. Happy Holidays!

Not enough Shuuhei this time around... T__T

I love this story and what i had to offer but I felt it could have been better. I found myself lost at times because the direction was in my humble opinion (and for the sake of providing concrit) weak at times. I got most of of what was going on because I'm no novice when it comes to sex, but you can't always assume that you readers are adept to know that Shuuhei was doing double anal penetration. Also, I noticed penis or any other direct noun for the word was not used which further caused an air of confusion.

Overall, I still thought this was fun to read and rather hot. I will be reading the rest of these as well seeing as I love Shuu-chan. After all, who wouldn't want to read about Bleach's favorite town bicycle! XD

Keep up the good work.

This was absolutely briliant, cleverly written! Aizen/Shuuei I love your writing style. ;3 This totally made my night and made me laugh! Cudos! 10/10

Kay~

This latest one was very interesting. I've never seen Shuuhei with Aizen before. =o

Oooh, and orgy! Lolz. This was yummy. And yeah, Shuuhei is a total slut. Here I thought it would have been one of the Vizards joining in (if I say Kensei I know I'm just fangirling all over the place, but still...I love Shuuhei being taken, can't help it). Anyways, I can't wait to read the next chapter. And what was Kira forgetting?

Shuuhei Orgy FTW!

Wow, that's interesting. I don't think I have ever seen Gin/Shuuhei before. It wasn't bad at all. :3

Huh. I'm sorry, I thought I should comment--I was playing here on AFF and came across what I thought was a continuation of your fic, but discovered that it's not. The title is "Shuu-kun is a Slut", and I was disappointed when I realized that it wasn't yours (I thought you had changed the title). Just wanted to give you a heads up.