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for The Burden of Proof

by orionshadow

person Jennyt82
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As always i love your work, it explained a lot which is always good. Update different circumstances or for the love of a friend soon. I don't think this story needs any more chapters, it works well as a stand alone alongside the other two stories. Keep up the fantastic work!
person Kashima
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful and well written story orion even though its a one shot it was of superb quality and the intimate scenes were amazingly done. I honestly like the coupling of yumichika and rukia and hope to hear a bit more about them in the main stories.
person Yakumo
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't like het that much but I decided to read this and came away pleasantly surprised. Mainly because I adore Yumichika...<3 He and Rukia make an interesting pairing though. I'd gladly do Yumichika, regardless of whether or not he's gay. xD Anyway, you did a good job.
person taixi
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you wrote this. I was really hating on Rukia for her seemingly callous treatment of Renji in Different Circumstances. This puts a human face to her actions and makes her and Yumi eminently more likable in the overall universe of your stories. It was a great one-shot and doesn't need a sequel of any sort. Anyhow, I'm sure we'll here more about what happens to these two in one of your other chapter stories - but the background provided here is just enough to be satisfying and not too much. Thanks!
person Sweetest
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Wild applause* Bravo! You are a genius! Lol. Who'd have thought? Rukia and YUMICHIKA!? Wow. I'm in awe. And it was a great lemon too! Perfecto!