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schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww yay I loved this chapter its so cute I love Izuru I have a big body pillow with him on it, its hot... yeah I cant wait for more ~_^
schedule June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and look forward to more. Thank you for putting it on.
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I cant wait to read when and if there is more posted to the story. ^_^ I love how Izuru passes out, but I loved Gin when he teased him in the beining. I'm sorry if I am rambaling. It kinda happens alot
person Catatonique
schedule June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful work! Looking forward to the up-coming chapters. May I point out a few things? Firstly some of your Japanese isn't quite right.

“-san” is the honorific used for an acquaintance or someone you don’t know that well and may be applied for either gender.
“-kun” is similar to “-san” but is specific to the male gender.
“-chan” is the suffix for a pet name.

Other than that, I look forward to reading onwards!

~Cat
person Yakumo
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice characterization. I'm looking forward to your next updates!