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I read the whole story through. Thanks for sharing such an entertaining tale. I think this is a great story idea. I'm glad that you took the time needed for writing it. There were a few small spots where I got confused. Normally, it was the typo that threw me. Since I have made the same mistake when writing a raw draft I quickly understood the confusing seconds. Using spell check is the fastest way to correct spelling problems as I know better than most. Overall, I really think you did a great job showing the volatility of the characters which made the story very amusing and a fun read. Please keep writing and improving.

I've always really enjoyed this story but I haven't left reviews because the story has stayed at this point,leaving me extremely confused about what is going on. With there being no explanation of how Ichigo ended up losing his powers with Aizen free but 'exiled'? It's frustrating. I hope this story gets updated because it would be more enjoyable to know what's going on in the storyline. I've reread it a few times but without it making sense, it just leaves me confused. The info about what's going on in Ichi's life is vague and I can only hope that if or when it's updated there will be some info given to fill in the blanks. I also really hope that Ichigo gets his powers back. To be honest,I've never understood how he could lose his powers in the 'original story' when,after he was attacked by Byakuya when he & Renji took Rukia back to Soul Society... in order for Ichigo to awaken his 'own' soul reaper powers,Urahara & his assistants actually killed Ichigo by cutting his 'soul chain'(making his original human body become his gigai) & when he got his powers back it seemed that his powers had actually just been sealed temporarily when he defeated Aizen. How else could 9 captains & 7 vice captains donate their spiritual power into a sword,made by Urahara,then stab him with it and allow Ichigo to regain his soul reaper powers and abilities? When I read & reread it online(to figure it out),it seemed that the power placed in the sword (& then stabbed into him) broke whatever seal was on Ichigo's power(?)..(I always try to figure out how powerful Ichigo is but after reading that,it made me think that if it took the spiritual power of so many powerful reapers to help him, doesn't that mean Ichigo is EXTREMELY powerful?) Am I the only person to notice that Urahara actually killed Ichigo when he cut his soul chain & tossed him into the pit in the beginning of the series?

I'm confused. I hope this story gets continued

I don't understand how Ichigo lost his powers(in this story),while everyone else retained their powers & Renji was able to find Ichigo by sensing his reatsu(which makes this story more confusing,as I don't understand how come he no longer has powers but still has reatsu.)It would help if there was an explanation for why or how Ichigo lost his powers but retained his reatsu in this story,especially since it mentioned that Aizen is still on the loose which leads me to think that Ichigo didn't lose his powers during the winter war when he defeated Aizen & lost his powers because they became sealed (along?...with Aizen's soul...because of some spell or trap that Urahara had built into the Hogyokou(?)) because there's no explanation.

This story is really good so far. I really liked this part at the end-

"Thanks man.That was…. I can’t describe it,"Ichigo panted.
"You're telling me.I haven't had that much fun in decades,"Renji whispered,kissing his ear.
"I don't know though...if I'm ready for...well...you know..." Ichigo murmured.
"No rush.Not when there's so much fun to explore first.You may have learned Bankai in three days but you couldn’t master it outside of Soul society, remember?"
"You telling me I'm going to suck at home plate?"Ichigo asked, lifting his head.
"No Ichigo.I'm just saying that you don't have to rush to master everything.Sometimes there's something to be said for taking the long way," Renji explained, reaching down to lick his hands and taste Ichigo's ejaculate.Ichigo felt proud of how flushed and sweaty Renji seemed.
"I don't have ten years to learn sex,"Ichigo nudged him.
"No, but I don't want to rush this. It means too much to me, Ichigo,"Renji said, caressing his cheek.
"Means too much?"Ichigo blinked.He suddenly felt all warm and gooey inside, something he never thought Renji Abarai would do.
"Yeah.You look surprised.Why shouldn't I care about you and me? I don't do this with just anyone, you know."
"Didn’t think you did. Cause if you did I'd have to kill them," Ichigo said, with a slow smile of contentment.
"C'mere,"Renji said, pulling Ichigo into his arms and giving him another delicious kiss.

I thought it was sweet when Renji said-I haven't had that much fun in decades,"Renji whispered,(& this)I don't want to rush this.It means too much to me, Ichigo,"Renji said,(& this)"Yeah.You look surprised.Why shouldn't I care about you and me? I don't do this with just anyone, you know."

I can't wait to read more and see where their relationship goes.Shinigami's live such long lives but Renji says(or implies) he hasn't been with anyone in a long time(decades?).Then,when he says that he doesn't want to rush this with Ichi becausae he really cares about him and he wouldn't do this with just anyone. I can't wait to read more.

wee so nice. really love it! looking forward to the next chapter. ! <3

Yay! An update. I like how you've incorporated the new arc in there. NICE!!!

Yaaay you updated! =D I really like this story. Ichigo and Renji are sooo good together. I love Chad and Uryu too. They're so cute. x3 Two of my favorite pairs in one great story, is it too good to be true? xD I love the new chapters. Ichi so happy to be home he hugs his dad? Too cute.x3 The 'argument' between Ren and Ichi was funny and the waiter's comment was hilarious. xD And the lemon... mmm mmm good! I hope you update again soon. I can't wait. =D

HA!!! Didn't see that comin' did ya Byakuya?!?!

OH CRUD! Byakuya, what did you do now?!?!