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by Rockyshores

schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...okay then. *grins* this is getting even better!
In my own defense, I did read the book that inspired this fic, but it was a looooong time ago; so it's quite nice that I have no idea what's going to happen next.
person Yakumo
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great job as always. ^.^
schedule August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Did not see that coming, Mr. Blindsiding Truck. But you did say he was a ghost from the future...

Oh, Shirosaki is the leader of a gang! As very sexy gang, if I say so myself. Byakuya so wants Ichigo, and Renji is kind of stupid...so is Grimmy.

I cannot wait for more. If Shirosaki finds his non-ghost person, and stops Ichigo from killing him, won't he not be a ghost to stop it? Ah, a paradox! Yay!
person kunitsu
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was amusing to see that Shirosaki was part of the reason why Ichigo came so hard, oh if only Renji knew. Wow the was Shirosaki shows his jealousy is really wierd. I am really getting curoius as to how he died and what was Ichigos part in it
person NeonOranges
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, dual Ichi molestation, it should be an oplympic sport, hmmm, yes.

On a more serious note I have to admit that while I usually adore your work for the sheer nosebleed factor this story has got me hooked, I find myself wanting to know what happens next, how the relationships work out, how Shiro died , who really killed him and where his 'alive' self is.

So in all, keep up the good work, I, and I'm sure many others, await the next xhapter with baited breath!
schedule August 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, poor Ichi! There's nothing quite as bad as cold hands! I can't wait for more! I hope Shirosaki can break Renji and Ichigo up without causing too much harm.

I think Yoruichi was a really great psychic after all. I hope Ichigo can visit her again!

Maybe there could be a little more two-person-Renji-unaware molestation, please?
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kool~! Great chapter!! XD WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!! ^^ lol, poor Ichi~!
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm officially dying here. Usually I can figure out what might happen in upcoming chapters (I read waaaay too many books, and plot twists start becoming recognizable--which doesn't make reading less enjoyable, oh no) but I have no idea. Did Ichigo really kill Shirosaki? I'm beginning to think he didn't, and that Renji has something to do with the whole mess...but I'm clueless.
With all that said, I'm dying to find out what happens next.
person Yakumo
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I would go to her house just to look at Byakuya. xD Anyway, nice job with this chapter; looking forward to the next one!
person kunitsu
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I didnt expect Yoruichi to be the fortune teller I thought it would be Urahara. Lovely update