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for Cherry Lips

by Rockyshores

person TCat
schedule February 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hi there is a problem with chapter8 for some reason i can't read it hell theres nothing to read but only coments from others i would really like to read this part of the story to please fix it I'm dying to know what happens there
schedule December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah, my dear bonnenuit, your super smexy awesome writing knows no bounds. I worship at your feet, O Great Pervy One! *grovels* I look forward to reading more of your wonderfully smutty work in the future.

Yours Debatably,

The Porn Fairy (a.k.a Ilaria Beatrix Creeper)
person kunitsu
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What can I say you made a very funny A/N
Oooooooooh damn I love how Sousuke brought out Ichigos kinky side. They are so cute and amusing together. The ending was nice, it didnt feel like it needed more.
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*in tears*
i...cant...believe its OVER!!!!!!
how dare you.
tho.
that last bit was funny.
but...who did Byakuya end up with.
lol.
make another soon.

~Golden Kitsune~
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY I loved the last chappy Sousuke and Ichigo should be with each other yay loved and cant wait for your next story!!
person meshala101
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can’t believe you brought cherry lips to and end, it all feels so sudden, I’m already feeling withdrawal pains. I guess we can only hope that one day you’ll be in the mood for a sequel, I would love to read more about these two. The last chapter was good, sousuke asking Ichigo to marry him and getting a face full of pillow was a great way to end it and the epilogue at end was appreciated its really not nice to end a fic with so many loose ends twisting in the wind, I thought you tied it all together rather nicely.

Now onto a new fic I suppose *hint, hint* I wonder how you’d interpret a relationship between Ichigo and a perverted kisuke. *hint hint* (did you catch that, such a small request from such a devout reader/ REVIEWER.) lol
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Smackingly delicious. I like your words on what happened with teh other. good for Renji to have someone. Thanks for finishing
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL, I only got to review this chapter now! I was stuck in the hospital for ten days battling dengue fever for the second time. *sigh* Bugs make me hate living in the tropics.

Anyhoo, loved this! Wish Isshin gave Sousuke a harder time, though. Nyahaha!

Kisses, honey! ♥
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little sad it's over, but I loved it all the same! ^_^
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice! ^^ And a really cute ending! I can't wait for you to write a new story!! WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!! XD (Something with Slave!Ichi? Mabye?)