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for Cherry Lips

by Rockyshores

person charlotte
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the story, and this is really nit-picky of me, but since this takes place in Japan, the phone number format Ichigo gives is wrong. Most cell-phones in Japan are a series of 3-4-4, so 000-0000-0000. But that's nit picky and only people who either have Japanese phones or call people in Japan would know.
person Anon
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GAH! DRAMA! *tugs at hair* Still, Aizen that bastard...forcing yourself on poor Ichigo! *shakes head* I was so happy to see you'd updated I ended up screaming and dancing around—annoying my less-than-amused roommate who's trying to study... *mutters apologies from a dark corner*

I know what you mean! I love seeing fast updates and I really appreciate author's like you who take so much time out of their personal lives to feed us hungry readers. It really shows what a passionate love of writing you have. ^_^
person Anon
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
One last thing...Happy Birthday! I hope you had a nice one. Though birthdays don't seem as pleasing once you're away from your parents (who supplied most of your better gifts). Not to mention that I just keep getting older and older. Oh god, off that thought trail, please. Since I'm broke and communicating to you through my beat-down computer, cyber cookies are what you get from me! Since I'm able to control everything here, let's say they're moist and yummy, and not rock hard and salty like they'd be in real life.

...Yeah. I feel really depressed now. Loved the chapter! Can't wait for more~!
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved those three chapters sooo good cant wait to see what happens next I hope he doesnt hurt cutie Ichigo!!
person Pickles
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wowww!!! This story is AMAZING!!! I loveee all the forcing, groping, crossdressing and dominating stuff!! RAWRRRRRRR!!!!
Keep up the good work and update! Or I'm gonna hunt u down!! >D
person Vera
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, you are one of the best bleach fanfic writers out there. Every time you write a new story, it's like you hit a home run every single time. I bookmarked them all. Keep up the good work.

I would also like to be put on the notification list for this and any future fics.

Love,
Vera
person Vera
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, forgot to write my e-mail: veronique_sheridan@hotmail.com
person Tiramisu
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woot!! Yummy Yummy Yaoi soon!! Droooooool......If you make it good I'll send you virtual pie!! Any kind you like!! :)
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like that you made Aizen a person. You know, with feelings and stuff. Lol, most fics make him so cold and evil and omniscient. I like that he was fooled, nyahaha! :3

Waaa, now I have nothing to do for the next few days. :( Update!!! :D
schedule August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kool!! ^^ I don't know which I feel more pity for ], Ichigo, Aizen, or the erections! XD lol (I can't spell!) DX HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! =D lol, WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!