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for Cherry Lips

by Rockyshores

schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XD My friend and I almost died at Karin's 'uke' comment! I LOVED IT!
person anon
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loving your story... keep up the good work!
person kai
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha...i liked that they were having a normal convo while ichigo and zaraki were fighting each other. that was awesome. and also
‘meet the Yakuza and a crazy ass weirdo who masquerades as a responsible adult.’ as a title would've been funny. ^_^

can't wait to read the rest. ^_^
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol, real cute chapter!! XD WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was funny as hell. Nice and light-hearted (I loved the scene in the restaurant, I was giggling the entire time). Oh, and yes, Chapter 9 does have a lovely ring to it *grins*
person mitapyon
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cant access chap.9 on ff.net, so thank god i can read it on aff.net!

So, one chapter left to go... Please make it meaningful! Thanks for the great chaps!

Mietharules
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad te more masculine side of Ichigo is comming out. Boy is HOT!!!!!
person ShadowofLight
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I was giggling up a storm!! I loved how everyone was talking calmly and eating while Ichigi (in a kimono of all things!) and Kenpachi duked it out. I was also wondering if you were gonna bring him into this and I'm glad. I also love the family's reaction to Ichigo and Aizen's relationship, talk about knowing their brother/son! Very nicely done and I'm excited to read the next one. And this 'so-called wedding'.
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XD I love your Bleach fanfics!!!
And I love this AizenxIchigo pairing!

May I suggest an idea?
What if someone who has revenge to Aizen take an advantage of Ichigo???


Thanks a lot! (^o^)/* I'll be waiting for the other chapters!
person angeloffire015
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
just so ya know -kun is used when referring to a male so Aizen would call Ichigo Ichigo-chan instead since he didn't know Ichigo's a male.

Great story so far by the way