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for Cherry Lips

by Rockyshores

person Anon
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*dies**just goes and dies* Smut chapter. Oh honey you just made my day—no, no—made my week! I think I'm going to have to join in on that evil laughter...

And yes, Comcast does suck. -_-;
person meshala101
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I should feel sorry for ichigo....but I dont lol. I do feel sorry for his ass, that took quite the pounding. Good ch. Great smut, just one side note, I see that azien likes seeing his come leaking out of ichigo's ass but going to sleep with wet come everywhere not too comfortable, especially when it starts drying on your skin, since ichigo was fucked unconcious lol (loved it) azien should have taken care of him, cleaned them both off with a wet washcloth or something, or maybe next time have them both suit up then you don't have to worry about the clean up afterwards.
person debee10
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I kid you not when I say that I did not blink while reading this chapter!!! I was afraid that if I did blink, that I would miss some detail. I wonder if you're the one whose perverted or is it your muse cause your smut scene was pure brilliance. I was at first disappointed that I didnt get my yaoi fix but you just made it all better!!!! By the way, totally loved Haunted, executed very nicely. Cant wait to see what you and your muse have cooking in the kitchen!!
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*nosebleed*

Luckily--*stuffs tissue in nose*--I came prepared this time!

That was HOT. Though if I were Ichigo, I'd probably be gone by morning because I'd be so pissed. Then I'd come back grudgingly. Nyahaha! ♥
person kunitsu
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh kinky, me likey. Ok lets rephrase your sentence, A possesive Sousuke is very hot, sexy and kinky :D
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
will join u in the laugh...
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*drool* ... *goes to read it again... for the 12th thime...*
person kai
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
gotta love DP!! ^_^
nice job! i liked it very much. ^_^
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the evil laughs. Aizen does that, right? He's a naughty pervert, but also a sex-god. And the only thing left to do is laugh. Hahaha.

Very sexy! Poor abused, satisfied Ichigo...Thanks!
person Tiramisu
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Darnit!! I have to take a cold shower now!!.....I don't think that will work tho.....Maybe I can tackle Hubby & have my way with him....