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for Cherry Lips

by Rockyshores

schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn... I feel sorry for poor Ichi. Aizen's still got that cruelty to him but at least he's not killing people... yet.
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Um WOWZERS!! That was sooo Fucking hot Sousuke is so sexy and Ichigo is so slutty I love it!! ~_^ cant wait for more xD
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a hot chapter!
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn... Didn't see this coming at all. NICE!
person Anon
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Six:

Sorry my review is so late! I lost my internet! *couldn't pay the bill on time* And comcast is a horrible company to try and talk with. I think I spent at least six hours of my Saturday trying to talk to a human, and failing. Ugh. But it's back, and here I am!

Renjizilla...I'm not sure if the mental image of this makes me want to cower in fear, or burst out laughing. I think I'm steering towards the latter. That's probably since my mental image is Renji running around Aizen spitting fire... *giggles*

SQUEE. Worried Aizen ftw! I loved this chapter so, so much (cutting out Grimmjow being a dumbass, of course...). This story is getting soooo good and I'm itching to start chapter seven. *heads over there right now
person Anon
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*stunned silence*

Um, whoa. Totally. Not. Expecting. That. I guess I should have, but I really didn't. Especially not Renji's involvement... *sobs* Forgive me for doubting you in the moment Aizen-sama!

Amazing chapter as always and a great thing to have to come back to the moment my internet was on. Lolz. I love this story, and I'm skipping off right now to go read your new one. Can't wait for more with this story!

-Mizu.B
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*starry eyed* I can somehow picture how Aizen will be punishing our kawaii little Ichigo. BONDAGE!!! Shibari!!! Although I must say that Renji's move was pretty much drastic, not to mention Byakuya being a yakuza member was pretty good, although I do wonder what kind of role does Byakuya have in Ichigo's life. *I hope there's something romantic... Ku ku ku ku...*

I look forward to your update!
person kunitsu
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woah that was unexpected. Ichigo is surrounded by people who are in the Yakuza. I was surprised to find out that Renji had killed for Ichigo. Wah I love it when Sousuke gets all possesive
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweet story! And awesome twist to the story...you really know how to write a good story.
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nothing to be criticized about, I totally agree, hehehe. But it makes me sad to see Ichigo sad, gosh I’m such a fan girl when it comes to hot stuff Ichigo :P LOL!!!

Wow, what a twist to Renji and Byakuya, I wasn't expecting that at all. And Aizen having a sweet side is cute, I love how he is towards Ichigo in the story.

Lovely update as always! And I am looking forward to the next update!! :D