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whoa, big twist, didn't see that coming. ^_^
also, i thought you were actually going to kill renji, i thought it. but i'm glad you didn't

Ooh, I love this twist! I'm sad that poor Grimmy's dead, but how glad am I that Bya-kun is yakuza too?! I kinda thought he was because he was never in the picture in earlier chapters, which I found suspicious. Plus I can never think of him outside the wealthy and ominous kind of setting. (^^,)

Awww...Aizen being sweet. Awww. ♥

OMG didnt see that coming! DIDNT SEE IT COMING.. i thought Renji was going to kill him self! * gets more propcorn* cant wait for 8. Only if Bleach was really like this.

wow poor renji, it was obvious from the begining how he felt about Ichigo but of course Ichigo never noticed, and it seemed renji was able to keep it all in check his feelings and desires for his friend, probably because he thought his friend was compltelty straight and he didnt want things to become akward between them but now that Ichigo is in love and with a guy at that, a guy who isn't him, he's completely losing it. Why not him, his friend and roommate, why chose a nearly perfect stranger over him when he can be assured of how he feels? How agonizing; I love it.

I can't wait to see whats in store for Ichigo next hopefully some hot azien loving;) but I know one thing for sure, now that azien knows how renji feels about Ichigo and after witnessing that chaste kiss ichigo gave him theirs no way in hell azien is going to continue to let him live with him. Ichigo might as well give it up and say goodbye to life as he knows it. lol

this is a very nice fic!
don't make renji that big of an idiot..
are rukia and orihime together?
I would love to be on your update-list!

Aw, no more? I loved this one! I really hope Renji can find someone else! Poor sod, maybe Byakuya could help him out of his misery...?

Aizen blushed! That was perfect and sweet! I love them together in this! Thanks!

Well that was a twist I wasn't expecting! Bye Grimmie! Heh, it pays to have people in high places even if it is in yakuzas. I am really enoying this, Aizen has some human emotions, ie jealousy, and Renji--he just screwed up. Like I said I am really enjoying it and I can't wait to read the rest :)

Oh no is Sousuke gonna hurt Grimmjow I love him thou umm I hope its not too bad.... Well I cant wait to read what happens next... xD

Grimmjow, NOOOOOOO! Hah, and in comes Stark for the cockblock!! Topped of with a tender moment with Aizen *awwww*

I loved Rukia & Orohime's fangirling reactions.

I was waiting for this update I thought your last chapter was great but unfortunately this one seemed a little rushed, Ichigo’s scene with his friends didn’t ring true Ichigo whose never been with a man and who blatantly denied being attracted to men suddenly has no problem disclosing the fact to all of them in what seemed to be his coming out party has no problem announcing that he’s now romantically involved with Aizen (for real this time) but that he’s also been deflowered (okay he didn’t willing admit that part) but can you see where I’m coming from, I think Renji should have been the first to know their roommates and he would know that Ichigo didn’t come home the night before and would want an explanation once he sees him, ichigo would then admit he was with Aizen and by the flushed, embarrassed and uncomfortable look on his face would then shout out “oh my god you slept with him didn’t you” that would have been priceless. lol

But my real problem with the chapter is Grimm, in the first couple paragraphs we read that he’s become obsessed with ichigo (interesting) but he also knows that to go after him now while he’s still involved with his boss would be signing his own death warrant and knows that to have him he has to wait for Aizen to grow tired of him and discard him. Okay got that sounds good, but then why does he do a 180 by kidnapping ichigo and trying to rape him? It just didn’t add up and that’s why it felt rushed to me. It would have been more menacing if you were to say that during that week apart from Aizen that Grimm had also learned the truth and that during that week, he had been stalking the young red head thinking that Aizen was done with him and just as he was about to claim his prize Aizen pulls up and snatches his prey right out from under him, maybe then Grimm losing control and all sense of self perseveration would have made much more sense.

Sorry my review couldn’t be more positive. I’m still enjoying your fic and I’m looking forward to the next chapter.